Broken Things Not Meant To Last.

"Can't put your mind in a cast

but broken things aren't meant to last 

Like walking on broken glass

reminding you bout scars of past

cause the world went by so fast 

But not you,              your stuck

left alone        and out of luck

they hunt you down when your mind says duck

need a hug?

i don't think so

cause your on a sinking boat 

knowing that you can't float 


you drown in your sorrows

imprisoned, no bridge across This moat."

This poem is about: 
My community
My country
Our world



you guys, do you even know How to comment or are you just purposely not commenting? i Want to get better and i thought that one of you would get that but 108 poems later and not a single comment

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