I Drowned

I'm pretty sure 
I drowned last night,
When I cried myself to sleep.
When waves of pain 
Crashed on my skull, 
And left me in a heap. 
Choking on my salty sea, 
I slept and thought I died,
But when I woke to find black earth
I knew that heaven lied.

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