Poems from thespianicloser
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You figured it out?
Sure
I announced it to part of the student body but you understood it?
My monologue was masterfully mysterious so that...
It’s hard to listen to you
When your confidence clogs up the house
Why can’t you be more like me?
Meek and quiet
Ready to run at any moment...
If you want to find me, I’ll be on the
Side of the road. Curled up and waiting for
The vultures to descend on my warm and
Peaceful body...
I’d be the honey suckle on your tongue
I’d be the perfume surrounding your senses
I’d be the light through the darkness
You’d beg for more...
I’ll use my broken bones as a splint
My black eyes will start my eye shadow
You can’t keep me away with the danger of bloody noses
Violence...