Poems from thespianicloser
Hey! I'm using this site as a way to edit my poems and get feedback. Any comment/advice would be much appreciated! I'm new to writing poetry and editing, so I need as much help as I can get.
I’m no dancer
I want to be but...
It’s nice to think about but...
It’s impossible for me to be a dancer
I wish I could create things like...
You need your sleep
Night is better than day
Close your eyes
Staple them shut if you must
And sleep for me
Breathe for me
Better for me...
Maybe marrying a man might help
Men make me merry...
Might make me malicious or murder me,
But men might make me moneyed
My G-d Molly men...
Long hair gets in the way as the guitarist starts to strum, eyes closed, nails long, nails painted, mic close
she’s mine, i’m hers, honey,...
How could i have been assaulted again?
I must have asked for it
I was leading him on anyway