Poems from thespianicloser
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Sorry girl
I’ve loved you through the whirlwind
Of your wurl of emotions
Your curls cover my bed
You twirl across my dreams
And I won’t...
Cool girl doesn’t get jealous
Cool girl doesn’t ask “to talk”
Cool girl has sex whenever you want her to
And cool girl has been good to me...
I wish somebody knew me
But nobody knows me
And it’s my fault
I push away
To be safe
Being alone
Is safer than being
With others, others...
G-d I’m tired
I’m tired of working, trying to attain the wherewithal
All this work, I wish I was retired
It’ll be my downfall
Fucking you...
He’s ugly
Smugly laughing at your voice
Rejoice that soon you rid your life of him
Skim the bodies of campus again and find one better...