Poems from thespianicloser

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Hey! I'm using this site as a way to edit my poems and get feedback. Any comment/advice would be much appreciated! I'm new to writing poetry and editing, so I need as much help as I can get.
Sorry girl I’ve loved you through the whirlwind Of your wurl of emotions Your curls cover my bed You twirl across my dreams And I won’t...
Cool girl doesn’t get jealous Cool girl doesn’t ask “to talk” Cool girl has sex whenever you want her to And cool girl has been good to me...
I wish somebody knew me But nobody knows me And it’s my fault I push away To be safe Being alone Is safer than being With others, others...
G-d I’m tired I’m tired of working, trying to attain the wherewithal All this work, I wish I was retired It’ll be my downfall Fucking you...
He’s ugly Smugly laughing at your voice Rejoice that soon you rid your life of him Skim the bodies of campus again and find one better...

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