Poems from thespianicloser
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Your smile rots my teeth
Far too sweet for me
I can feel your sugar in my body
Days after you left me
Stomach blooming
I can’t accept this...
Her friends warned her about you
Swarming in her ears like the maggots in your eyes
Still, she crawls to your crow call
Like a child in...
you really could be delectable
but…
i can’t take you home
you’re too much
i wish you were less
“not that i would ever” dictate how your...
They move without a purpose
They stop and start with the longest pause in between
I don’t have time to stop
I gotta keep moving
If I stop...
He keeps me safe
I trust him because I fear him
And he’s all I need and more
He has a power over me he can’t control
He makes the birds...