Take Away I

If I took away the I

Maybe people would stop the lie

The focus wouldn't be on win

Think if people stopped the sin


What if we helped one another

Shared with our brother

Cared and not just looked away

Learned to walk a noble way


I would love to change the greed

And help America to feed

Not just themselves

But the countries that are in need









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