Sad Thing

he sat down beside me

and shared with me a glance

I gave a small timid smile

feeling belittled by doubt and the cold heavy morning.

he said come over

and I said I will

even though, I know,

my eyes would be tired from crying.


Maritza Ruby Altamirano

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