A Haiku On Helping Others But Not Yourself

Fri, 08/04/2017 - 19:04 -- MARs

She didn't know why
Her anti-suicide talks
Wouldn't work on her.

This poem is about: 
Me

Comments

MVP-Most Valuable Poet

7 years ago

Your faith is very strong
Suicide is cowardice, it will never work on you
Well said
God bless you

MARs

7 years ago

Thank you. I personally don't view it as cowardice, but that's my opinion. Thank you so much for your continuous feedback and comments, I very much appreciate it!

Additional Resources

Get AI Feedback on your poem

Interested in feedback on your poem? Try our AI Feedback tool.
 

 

If You Need Support

If you ever need help or support, we trust CrisisTextline.org for people dealing with depression. Text HOME to 741741