God Please Write Me Quickly

God please write me quickly

i'm running out of time,

my family has no time for me 

and i can't say goodbye.

it's not the words that stop me,

nor their meaning make me cry,

it's just, they aren't listening.

and all my tears are dry.

God please write me quickly,

i'm tired of this fight,

this soldiers growing weary 

so please just let me die.

God please write me quickly.

"i wanna come home," i cry

i don't want the dawn to come.

but i'm scared of the night.

 

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TamingOfSeaWolves

comment if you're capable

T. W. Hallum

How beautiful!  This piece gripped my soul when I read it. 

You have a wonderful talent!  Keep writing!

TamingOfSeaWolves

thank you so much! that means alot to me

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