Breathing Just Fine


Breathing Just Fine

            Held under water

            Gazing upon him

            We fight for a way out

            The sea blue runs black


            Sunlight fades

            As our fate is sealed

            Seconds pass like hours

            Time slows down


            Hearts beat as one

            The pressure stops

            We sink further under

            Darkness swirls around us


            But a light shines bright

            Giving a hope

            As we are together

            Breathing just fine


            Under the waterline

            Beyond the ends of time


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