Blackness

Location

blood clusters in a lust

massive starvation to the heart

slow beats of death pound; reaching the finale

no time to waste on love

murderous love led to blood

barely moving as short breaths weap out

craving of truth

no more lies

 

 

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savigirl14

Really good poem. Tells a side of true emotion. Please read my poems and tell me what you think.

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