And we kissing through It

Sat, 08/18/2012 - 07:12 -- FizTzle

Location

31620
United States
31° 7' 8.058" N, 83° 26' 34.8432" W

In a depression recession tribulation
Me & her hurting for money
And we kissing through It
Watching money watch online
She said do you think
We will survive
I say baby it's up to god
I'm just a maker of this relationship
And we kissing through It
Don't hurt baby don't cry
Buy you a napkin whip your tears away
Tomorrow that new day
Why oh do they think
That we can survive
The way government hurt us
People joke now I got her
This is my planet we run things
Mine & her airplane
Got five G's so fast see
And we kissing through It
Look how happy we are.

Comments

jwiener

The repetition of "and we kissing through it" shows how even though we may be subject to difficult situations, we can make the best of it by sticking close to the people we love, which is a great message.

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