warm thunder

grey and almighty

gentle suffocation from

large, calloused fingers

Comments

ScorpioD91

10 years ago

I like how you did a haiku for a change. Nice! :)

Grant-Grey Porter Hawk Guda

8 years ago

Powerful expression! 

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