Poems from brookesteen13
Hello! I'm a beginner poet trying to improve. I would love some constructive criticism so that I can develop some skills. I tend to write what I feel
Dopamine
Is something I desperately need
Borderline
Is what they all call me
My lifeline
Is something I hope would leave
But it keeps being...
To live with this thing inside of me
Wishin it would just leave
But I can’t breathe
Without it beat-ing
But maybe that’s a good thing
Cause...
I’m in this dilemma
With what I want and what I am
My mind is a dichotomy
I just wanna find a time to flee
From all this hurt that’s inside...
The ceiling
Is looking appealing
As I’m lying on the floor
Wondering the reasoning
For what I was put here for
I’m feeling
That I’m done...