Poems from brookesteen13
Hello! I'm a beginner poet trying to improve. I would love some constructive criticism so that I can develop some skills. I tend to write what I feel
You’re the hidden gem I was sent to search for
You’re the seed of strength inside my core
You’re the treasure I was obligated to obtain
You...
Your words corrupt
Destruct
And interrupt
But
Little do you know
I’m holding it in
Until I erupt
Sitting on the bathroom floor
Don’t worry I’ve been here before
You even swore
That you’d be here for
Me at my best and at my worst
That I...
I’m not your commodity
That you can use and abuse
And honestly
You aren’t worth my courtesy
You’re just a wannabe
This isn’t monopoly
Where...
I’m stuck inside this mind
If only I could stop the time
And what I want and what I am would align