Poems from brookesteen13
Hello! I'm a beginner poet trying to improve. I would love some constructive criticism so that I can develop some skills. I tend to write what I feel
If you’re a dream I don’t wanna wake up
If you’re a miracle I wanna believe
If you’re a book, I wanna read
If you’re a promise, I wanna...
We must find a solution
For this pollution
And find restitution
For what was lost in view
Because I cannot lose you
Due to
My own miscue...
You told me
That a small part of me wishes you’d just leave already
Because I’m suffering and emotionally unsteady
You told me that you...
Maybe I should kill
My mind
To fill
The empty hole
The pill
Always leaves behind
Your love wears off on me like medicine does to a junkie
Your love wears off on me like a razor and the need to bleed
But I keep coming...