What I would Change

the one thing I would change is that same sex marriage should be legal. to some people it may be unconstitutional but it is still their way of life and every one is equal or at least that's what they tell us. People deserve to be happy and they deserve to be in love and that goes for both gay and straight. It is not fair that Gay people get treated differently than what straight people do. Everyone should have the right to marry the person they love and that law in some states need to change. Same sex marriage should be allowed everywhere.

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