War and Price

Sun, 07/21/2013 - 12:53 -- AGJ

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A few million dead

War ain't easy it is said

Just the way it is?

Comments

SarahEarth

11 years ago

its good, but i think you could go further on it!

AGJ

11 years ago

It's supposed to be a haiku. It's one of my favorite formats beside free form.

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