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Even though we change,

And we're finding our place in the world.

We all know that when tears fall,

Or the smile spreads across our face.

We'll come to each other.

Because no matter where this crazy world takes us,

Nothing will ever change.

Where,

We're not still friends.

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jwiener

This is a wonderful poem about friendship! It reminds me of a graduation, where you realize that regardless of where your life take you, the friends who have been by your side will continue to be there. I especially like the lines "We all know that when tears fall, / Or the smile spreads across our face" because you show the different emotions that we go through with our friends. Have you thought of making a video to go along with the poem? I think it would have an even bigger impact if you set it to pictures of your friends! Check out how to make a multimedia poem in the Resources section.

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