Through Anothers Eyes

"Your smile fades 

As you look away

I see the broken pain

That is causing me shame

Why couldn't I see

What was pointed out so clearly

I went looking for trouble 

But it was right in front of me

I am a good friend I claim

But I was way off aim

It was all just a cover

Did I ever really trust her

I'm sorry I couldn"t see 

That you were really hurting."

This poem is about: 
Me

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TamingOfSeaWolves

please tell me how to improve my poetry~Seawolf

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