I embody the life of a young teen that’s struggling.
Going through high school not knowing what’s coming in.
I’m so obvious, making a decision that’s affecting the people that i'm living with.
Its killing me knowing fact that what I’m doing is some bull s***
Experimenting with things I shouldn’t touch
Knowing if the world here’s about it they gone clutch
Getting brain washed everyday
Doing what’s wrong and end up sinning everyday
People pray to god that I turn from my wicked ways
Cuz I take too many chances with the devil
So they say
I been dead since my innocence faded away
Inside these walls I fade to grey
I never wanted to be
But im still holding on cuz its okay
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At the moment when i was writting this poem my thoughts came from negativity that i saw around me and how i felt about my situation
This poem is awsome, I like this poem because it is true, the world is full of violance, doubt, misuderstanding, and confession with a bullet. That's why my favorite part of this poem is when the author wrote "I'm so obvious, making a decision that's affecting the people that in living with" but life is not always ended with a bullet it ends with peer pressure from other teens that has been effected in the mind that doing wrong is the right thing to do. Therefore, I also liked the part when the author wrote " I been dead since my innocence faded away"