20 mattresses,
20 down beds,
1 pea,
And a princess (me).


A pea is nothing.
But when you are sinking into feathers
and are pressed to the ceiling-
That is when your sleep is uncomfortable feeling.


In the end I got my prince
And a more comfortable bed.
Even though I had to spend that night sleepless
Everything turned out fine, I guess.



Wow funtastic. How u compare to a Disney princess is novel n super. I like to compare to beauty n the beast. There's a superb  rhyming word choice too, how u rhymed guess with sleepless was artsy. Thumbs up.


I'm a new poet here but I've been writing for other sites for ages and they have enjoyed so I would like your thoughts on my latest poem too. Pleez do comment on it.

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