Onomatopoeia

Wed, 06/19/2013 - 12:21 -- TENN44

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19133
United States
39° 59' 37.7808" N, 75° 8' 23.7984" W

POW! POW! POW!

Wait! Life has to see-

POW! POW! POW!

The slimy-spunned around crime of intestines-

POW! POW! POW!

Why can't you stop, my friend is-

POW! POW! POW!

My unknown last days were not lived because it ended so sudden-

POW! POW! POW!

When will the ammo send me a note instead of a-

POW! POW!

Can't you tell me what's the scenario-

POW! POW!

Do you have a breath?

To test the possibility to use our own arensal to prevent trad-

POW! POW!

I hope your proud of your demeaning style-

POW!

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