Misfortunate Event:


United States
42° 58' 30.9864" N, 78° 52' 40.422" W

When ones so close to death
You didn't even notice you took your last breath
Your still alive
and yet there's so much hope
We all pray here
Left with cope
Your still young you've got so much left to see
Your daughter grow up and be what she dreams
Your son be a man left with much responsibility
We love you so much please don't let this be
As our tears release the pain of bein human being,we now know we are normal but there's still your future yet to see


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