Millionth Time

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Read words a million times

Until it is learned the millionth time.

Lost in a fumble of uncertainty

Because the ulcer of your indifference

Is a noxious depressant

Attacking my perception's cortex.

 

Voice insecurites a billion times

Until they are realized the billionth time.

Journeying toward definite change

Because the seclusion in your eyes

Is a callous wisdom

That underlies intense grasp.

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MVP-Most Valuable Poet

very inspirational

this poem feels like a rap verse with rhythm ,and drive

like how you use metaphors that connect to something that have relevance

keep writing

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