You've had me hooked for a while now,

You've got my walls coming quickly down,

You make me smile, I want you to stay,

What can I say, when you make me feel this way?

Every time you hold me close,

So much of the feeling shows.

Just take your time, hold me tight,

Let me fall asleep thinking of you tonight.


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