He Carried Me Too

"Your smile was      fading 



Its not the same

As it used to be

Cause you don't feel free

I can hear your screams

But don't forget to dream

Not all is as it seems

But what does it mean?

I tell you YOU ARE free

You don't have to scream

Please just listen to me

Keep hold of your dreams

You are free if you believe

Learn from your mistakes

Because even if you break

God will carry you

This I know is true

Because he carried me too."

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please tell me how to improve my poetry~Seawolf

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