Wed, 01/21/2015 - 18:02 -- jvkid


Morning, its your wake up call,

Don't fall back asleep, you might not get another chance,

This might make you want to get up and just dance,

Rewards don't just come, don't just glance,

Reach for the stars and grab the sun in your hands,

continue foward with your life, don't hold back,

No one can stop you, cause your still here,

In God loving hands, your perfection in his creation,

This is my mom talking to me, telling me I can reach

World Domination, I will grab it cause I am flawless,

I am God's creation and I will conquer.






This is determination cause life is hard and my mom always had my back. Not technically her words but her motivation to her son to do better and get what he deserves.

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