First Fall

I know I just met you

but please let me say

we could get food..

I mean..I want you to stay.

Ahhh not in a creepy way

I just could see us together is all

Not necessarily bf and gf 

But i am certainly starting to fall…


-ward. Shit! Whew!

I almost landed on my face

which would have been ok

if your face was the ground..

what I mean to say is I’m glad you seem sound.

In yourself hehe...

That’s a great quality to have

and you’re the prettiest girl I’ve seen

You remind me of my Dad….

Not because you’re a man 

or you made me

just he and I are close

and I think we are too…


I feel close, like i’ve know you longer

the type of girl who if I stay with

can only make me stronger.

Thats not to say I have nothing to give

because I’ll give you my all

a reason to live.

Wow. I am REALLY getting ahead of myself.

I suppose that’s the romantic in me.

Ill just put this conversation back on the shelf

and say I hope you and I could be “we”.

Simple enough, 



This was productive.

It was nice to meet you.

Oh and by the way,

that turtle neck you’re wearing

is extremely seductive.


Additional Resources

Get AI Feedback on your poem

Interested in feedback on your poem? Try our AI Feedback tool.


If You Need Support

If you ever need help or support, we trust for people dealing with depression. Text HOME to 741741