Traversing the brim of ill determination

stuck walking in eternal night


Existing only in those rusted hallows

purely pursued out of spite


Keeling, drenched, chafing of my knee

passive to my existence


One last love underneath thy name

treacherously you dismay


Lain here I splay, while suddenly

forgetful of blood divulged


The roaring saw's motor grows deafened

your brand new particle board,



then formed.


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