Do you

Seldom do I think your not powerful
A servant of Joy
A peace initiation for the Indians of Seneca
A Love
A Fire
A beautiful path in the light of forever
A reminder of effortless serenity
Push me down
Cry for me
A homeless cause
My Lover
Do you need me?



Very calm. Your poem is minimalistic in words, yet still conveys very vivid messages. In fact, even though I am not usually a fan of poems that utilize few words, your words here flow effortlessly into each other. And the final question at the end "Do you need me?", abolishes any doubt as to whether this person was truly devoted their lover. 


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