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Some days we are told how to feel and what to feel.

It is on those days that it is most important to listen to our hearts,

and not to think, but just to feel.

Some days we may feel alone or lost,

but those are the days where we truly find ourselves.

 

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Yarnold

I lke the sentament behind this, and I think the organization and line breaks are in wounderful places. However I thik maybe you verg on being cliche at points, for example the saying "listen to our hearts." could be replaced with a more specifica and pointed metaphor. In any case, great work, have an awesome day

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