Confined by these chains

They're tying me down

I'm feeling no pain as I helplessly drown

Floating and spinning in the waves of despair

A weight's being lifted

I release all my care

Sinking deeper and deeper into the wide open blue

I open my eyes, there's no sign of you

Darker by the second

With no where to turn

My opening eyes feel the salty sweet burn

Losing my wisdom with moments to pass

Memories bombard me like the smell of your hash

Sinking down to the bottom of the mystical blue

My last conscious moment is a flashback of you


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