You began your life with a simple dream...freedom! 
A desire to live as you please! 
The day you said no to your creator 
No! To the very hands that formed you! 
You denied your master! 
Enslaving your very being to a world of hatred!! 
Do you not see?
Look at the chains that bind you!
You are subject to your own destruction!! 
Yet you believe your self to be free
What lies you tell yourself!!
Is it better to believe that you are free?
Than to actually be so? 
Look and see! 
See he who sacrificed his body for freedoms cause!! 
Be enslaved no more!! 
Your freedom is there!! 
So take and live the life you were intended to!!
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