The Break Down

I see you hiding behind the pain 

black eyes on your face but you're saying "I'm okay"

no person deserves that inflicted pain upon their face

come on girl you deserve better don't fall for his bate

You're strong,wise but i see the biter side where he lies 

Push foward you're strong now

don't let that dog keep you down

Little boys have temper tandroms and can't keep their cool

Real Men protect and love their woman the others are fools

Realize my queen your crown can't be knocked off only tilted

Straighten it up and hold your head high you're the realist

Fight with your words and your actions not your fists

Don't let the brutality continue or it'll all be a mist

This poem is about: 
My community
My country
Our world
Guide that inspired this poem: 


Brianna Feggins

This poem goes out to the woman who encounter abuse! No woman or person for that matter desrve such cruel treatment and deserves respect! I've seen it first hand from the people i work with to the woman on social media encountering such file acts. Don't be afraid to speak up and fight for yourself ladies!

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