Broken

I look into your eyes that are now so bright...
My eyes are dark, with just a flickering light.
Oh, how I miss you...
I wonder if you miss me too...
I don't understand what you see in her,
You smile at me? I'll smile back, sure.
Everything I listen to, I find a song about us...
Please don't worry when you read this, I don't mean to make a fuss.

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Banderagirl123

9 years ago


I love your poem it reminds me of my boy friend he is an orpan and i can only call him at certain times and when i don't hear from him it worries me that he was adopted but he always finds a away to call me.
 

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