Do You Remember (Part 1)

Sun, 12/28/2014 - 16:47 -- Moyy

Location

My room
2531 Indiana St, Napa CA 94558
United States
38° 17' 3.2856" N, 122° 18' 17.5176" W

Do you remember the first time we met

You showed me Love that I'll never forget

As time went by me and you got real close

You understood all the words I wrote

And now I'm sitting in the studio late night

I'm thinking about you all the time girl It aint right

I had to call you on the phone just to hear your voice

I miss this girl is what i'm telling all my homeboys

Because it's true

And I know your living your life too

Should I be sorry that right now I cannot be with you

With you

Because I've got to let you know

I Love You Girl

You Are My World

I don't think anyone will ever love me like you do

I Love You Girl

You Are My World

I don't think anyone will ever love me like you do

Comments

MVP-Most Valuable Poet

very sincere

got talent, never waste it

keep building

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