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“She is displaying feigned feelings for him.” “He is such a fool to be in love with her.” That is what people say when they see us together. They do not know how I feel about you. .
When hopes start to disappoint you Dejection drains the power out of you Motivation dies deep inside the soul When criticism shows up to console  
Exasperation flows all over me When I hear them giggling behind me It occurs to me that They are happier than me
To make up for deficiencies Lacking or discrepancies To fix or make anew What's broke and disagrees with you. "But I haven't sinned!" I hear you cry "It went that way alone, awry!"
His mood was short The transient feeling was impermanent But it became plentiful and copious He was now fragile and tenuous the uncertainty of this precariousness
Drawing eyes is like creating my audience. My audience that so generously criticizes every one of my moves. My audience that doesn't dare to train their gaze off me.  
He asked for help - they laughed. He begged to be understood - they ignored. He screamed for attention - they didn't give it.
There is a spray tan in the oval office.  I don’t want to hear from the Tangerine Man about his wall.  The word ‘them’ has a greater capacity to separate people than any wall. 
  Can you see through the smog in the air In which the sun’s bright light is dimming from space debris, but we do not care Twilight's last gleaming, the only time the harsh pollution is hidden
eyes plastered up can't see petty brained fucks encompass you and me encircled and closed outside to in crash that shabby ass shack to no end
Criticized constantly by your dad Always comparing you to your brother, He tears you down and makes you sad
The cry of a little baby, The agony of young soul, The brutality of life, That streams down from souls, All this can be repaired, Walk to that beggar, Speak to that pregnant teenage girl,
“You need to study harder.” “You need to get better grades.” “You need to try harder.” “You need to work out more.” “You need to lose weight." “You need to be more outgoing.”  
A is for adultery and B is for bitches— the Cunts that Don’t know how to keep their legs shut. Egged on by eager men,
A is for a dirty girl, Banished from the Church, a Devil’s child, Excluded because of an unlawful Fuck.  
Dear you, bold, innovative, gifted, the brightest star. find fault? Think you can hang with the finest. Hah!
Him
Are we nothing more than His playthings
A ludicrous sticker placed on individuals who so call themselves,
You may wake up each and every day wondering what will today be like. Will it be better than yesterday or worse. You may get bullied, talked about, picked on, talked down, criticized, or etc but I just wanna let you know its apart of life.
You may wake up each and every day wondering what will today be like. Will it be better than yesterday or worse. You may get bullied, talked about, picked on, talked down, criticized, or etc but I just wanna let you know its apart of life.
Catholic school does a number on a child, He never knows what to believe. Dear God, that woman in the habit she rapped my fingers time and time again when I’d take the Lord’s name in vain,
A test score does not determine my capabilities; how quickly I can bubble in answers does not measure my intelligence.   I am not a statistic, another paycheck, a number.  
It's not easy I know. Going where nobody likes to go. A touchy subject that's for sure. But do you even know her? The struggles she's faced? The heartbreaks and pain?
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