You Said

Wed, 01/17/2018 - 19:12 -- kelbel4

You said, you said that we'd last

but now the flag flies half-mast

You said, you said this was true, so real

so how is it you cease to feel

You said, you said, don't give up

yet whose eyes look away so abrupt

You said you said:_____

 

And now I understand 

This poem is about: 
Me

Comments

Additional Resources

Get AI Feedback on your poem

Interested in feedback on your poem? Try our AI Feedback tool.
 

 

If You Need Support

If you ever need help or support, we trust CrisisTextline.org for people dealing with depression. Text HOME to 741741