You are doing too much

Thu, 04/17/2014 - 08:26 -- chd16

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You need to stop they say

Tomorrow is a new day

Your goals will always be there

But I'm not always going to be here

 

Time flies by and with it my dreams

Not making today count will deprive me of my goals

Stopping halfway will only lead to failure

I see the whole picture and rejoice in the sense of freedom

 

You need to stop they say

But I won't so I don't

Because they need to stop I say

Trying to deter me from my dreams

 

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