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Fri, 01/10/2014 - 00:42 -- echu24

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Rushing through my spine 
Spreading throughout my mind
Chills that left me cold
Freezing every time
Everytime you touch me
Everything is fine
I forget that you don't love me

Every single time
I forget that you just hug me
Getting what is mine
Ill let you take it and I'm mistaken

Shaken and breaking down
My cries dont make a sound
When no one is around
Puddles form upon the ground
And in them i'll drown. 

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