The Void

"The void

It knows me

Almost too well

The void

It throws me

Under the spell

You're not good enough

It whispers

You're not strong enough

For your sister

It's your own fault

You missed him

Hurts so bad

Never should have listened."

This poem is about: 
Me

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TamingOfSeaWolves

please tell me how to improve my poetry~Seawolf

TamingOfSeaWolves

please tell me how to improve my poetry~Seawolf

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