Picking up the bottle The stinging taste Burning you're throat You feel the heavy liquid Rolling over your tongue You roll the joint next to you You light it up and take a puff Coughing uncontrollably from the toxins Your friends keep telling you to stop You don't listen to their words You listen to the voice in your head Telling you to keep drinking To keep smoking that awful drug You've become so addicted And you can't stop Not now, not ever.
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