Time
Location
I'd change time.
The pace, the unsteadiness.
The uneasiness, the discombobulation.
The pace, the unsteadiness.
The ache, the frustration.
The pace, the unsteadiness.
The structure and its build.
Its face, its unreadiness.
Time.
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