In Ter State


United States
33° 50' 51.8136" N, 118° 7' 5.232" W

needle's talking ninety,
meter shaking from the volume,
windows pulse and this beat--
strands whip over my eyes,
windows low and this breeze.

speeding on clairvoyance
with a single hand to steer
that would slide to my side
if it could make it lose hope
in making it home alive.


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