Snowflakes

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Pale eyes

Blank face

Aching body sprawled on the floor

Crop circles

Formed from restless feet

The pipe leads the way to the motherland

 

Violent trembles calm to steady hands

Slowly

Slowly

Her heart ceases to beat

A white lipped smile feels pain

No more

Can’t see past the powdery snowflakes.

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