slight change

i put my cap down as i arrive

temperture prospered beyond 85  

its summer looking for a job  

dam  not having one made my momma cry 

time showing the change my mind  blaze with rage 

but still intact to remain 

one check doesn't really impress!

one check doesn't get me off stress!!

one check doesn't mean i have success !!!

but to continue even after the sweat, i say it  defines you different from the rest. This why one job would mean i cant sleep Nor rest, i got plenty time for that when i'm dead!!!


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