sex my pain

Thu, 06/06/2013 - 20:43 -- telvi1

I want to lay my pain in between your legs
I want to forget about the things going through my head
Why don’t you invite me inside your bed
I want you to seduce me from my hurt
I want you to think of me as your first
But sex me like i was your last
I ask you
Can I put my misery in the back if you
As I grope your ass and you stroke my sad
Can you swallow my tears
As I come all over your chest
Would it be ok if I cried over your breast
I just want to have sex
To put my sorrow at ease
Could you be remorseful enough to just fuck me

Comments

Shaynah Woody

Uhhh...pretty graphic but raw with emotion. Can't say I love the vulgarity but I do love how you used your words in such an intricate and painful way. I like your takes on this and admire your courage to show the ugly. Well written.

telvi1

Thank you I appreciate it. Not all of my poetry is as vulgar as this. This poem was actually something new to me, No one ever think of sex in such a manner or at least brave enough to share. People deal with their problems in many ways and this poem express one way people deal with them through sex.

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