Wed, 04/16/2014 - 10:51 -- lily13

All this violence,

has its range,

that's one thing 

that I would change.


A bad night between couples,

two many drinks,

makes them rethinks

their own happy nuptuals. 


Someone ready to serve

fighting for freedom,

for the red, white, and blue,

"they were going to attack 'em"

that's not always true.


All of this violence

that has its range

is the very thing 

that we should change.



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